Then, Something by Patricia Fargnoli

Review by Lori A. May
Then, Something
By Patricia Fargnoli
Tupelo Press
Perfect Bound, 84 pages
ISBN: 978-1-932195-79-8

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As the cover suggests, Then, Something by Patricia Fargnoli offers a contradiction, or juxtaposition, of things that are and things that are not. Blurring lines between reality and imagination, between what is and what is not, Fargnoli’s poems challenge the reader to ponder, question, and settle into the quiet unrest of unknowns.  
From the opening poem, “Wherever you are going,” Fargnoli’s narrator heeds warnings and provides advice for the poetic journey ahead:
You will try to take a prayer you might have otherwise left behind in case you need it—
    and a memory of the love you have been calling back—but you will soon forget.
take less than nothing and even less than that. Remove your shoes, place your pulse along the table,
    release breath. Leave behind the scars on your finger, your thigh, the long one over your heart.
Just when the reader begins to brace for uncertainties, Fargnoli’s narrator asserts concrete wisdom, in the poem “On the Question of the Soul:”
It doesn’t care whether or not you believe in it.
It is unassailable and contradictory: the dog
that comes barking and wagging its tail.
As these excerpts demonstrate, Fargnoli has a passion for the long line. Most poems extend to the far edges of the page, prose style, within tight verse. The white space between two line stanzas is deceiving; these are not light, quick lines. Fargnoli’s verse is fluid, but it is complicated and full of weighty questions. 
Too, the reader is subtly introduced to the poet, herself, in poems such as “Easter Morning,” where the narrator becomes poet and the poet becomes narrator:
Yesterday, after my reading,
a man handed me two paragraphs
about his shaky spirituality, saying
mine had helped with his own,
and a widow my age claimed I’d changed her life.
Such praise, hard to let in, harder to let go.
What do they know
of me except what I’ve written?
And what has that to do with this
awkward woman fiddling with her fingers,
biting skin off her lips,
becoming reluctantly old?
Indeed, what do we know but that which we are presented? What can we surmise of Fargnoli’s narrator or, perhaps, the poet herself? Everything. And nothing. As it flows in Then, Something, we, the reader, are given ample opportunity to dig deep, reveal layers, and find treasures of personal knowledge; yet, we’re left behind, most often on the sidelines, the margins, in briefly encountering an in only to be made aware that our experience was a mere hint at Fargnoli’s experience. 
Like the man who handed off paragraphs after a reading, we are in the audience. We do not play an active role. We observe. We question. We ponder. The only answers we are given in Fargnoli’s tightly weaved verse and prose like enchantments are ones we presume for ourselves, ones we think we understand. 
In “Approaching Seventy,” the poet reveals her own disconnection to those around her:
Sometimes, it feels as if I’ve said goodbye to everyone.
Through the north window, I watch clouds move off
beyond my vision and somewhere dissolve into rain.
Fargnoli’s world is complicated, beautiful, moving, and impenetrable. Her poems are the rain. We are the clouds. 
Lori A. May is the Founding Editor of Poets’ Quarterly. Visit her website at